Page 10 of the comic I am working on. I had a slow in momentum in making this because I had drawn ahead before finishing the story. I am actually still not finished scripting the remaining pages.
I’m happy with the tone of this page. It’s a quiet pivot point in this short story and I wanted this page to be sparse but also emotional.
The sulking astronaut, migrating geese, and the recurring reference to time passing work well to me.